Post by Valhalla Erikson on Dec 12, 2022 13:53:54 GMT
First off I'm not going to get into why the show was embarrassingly bad. There are plenty of videos on Youtube that will explain it better than I can. What I'm here for is to provide how I would've done the She-Hulk series.
She-Hulk to me is one of my top five Marvel Heroines. To say homegirl deserved better is an understatement. In a perfect world, it would've been an animated show but I'm going with what is presented so here I go.
First things first I'd get myself a writing team that KNOWS HOW TO WRITE COMEDY. And cares enough to do some research on how the court system works. I don't think the folks behind Ally McBeal are doing anything so I'd get them to write She-Hulk.
Second I'd make it a five-episode mini-series. Each episode will be around an hour long.
In the series, Jen is already leading a double life as both She-Hulk and her lawyer persona. We could have Jen break the fourth wall on she was planning on doing some deep character-driven arc that led to him becoming the green amazon she is now but that would be boring to most people. A knock on people not wanting origin stories for superheroes.
Jen's character arc in this series is that ever since she was a little girl she wanted to be a hero. But she lacked the powers and the physical capabilities in making it happen. So she decides to save people in a different way. By being a lawyer. Yet she soon realized just how fucked the American justice system is. So her arc is trying to straighten it out. Both as a lawyer and as a hero. It gives a nice underdog story that makes you want to root for her.
In this series, she's helping out a fellow hero who has been charged with a crime. As much as I hated the random cameos I felt this one plays a critical part in Jen's Arc. Jessica Jones.
Jessica had been arrested for the crime of murder and Jen, at this point in her law career, has been working as a public defender. So she's appointed as a lawyer for Jessica's case. Jen hears Jessica's side of the story and she comes to the conclusion that she was framed. So she investigates who framed her. But she's not alone as she gets an ally in Daredevil.
And no I'm not going to have it where they have sex because No. They just met first of all and if I were going to have it happen then it would be gradually. Also, the only cameos in this piece are that of Jessica Jones and Matt Murdock. It by no means sidelines Jen as she plays a pivotal role in Jessica's innocence.
Jen and Matt find out who framed Jess. Jen clears Jess's name. And the case gains her a bit of celebrity status. The series ends with her forming her own law firm.
So with this scenario, you have an underdog arc of Jen fighting the system. Jen goes out of her way to keep an innocent person from going to jail. And making friends within the superhero community. And end things to where she'd go on further adventures should the show is well recieved.
She-Hulk to me is one of my top five Marvel Heroines. To say homegirl deserved better is an understatement. In a perfect world, it would've been an animated show but I'm going with what is presented so here I go.
First things first I'd get myself a writing team that KNOWS HOW TO WRITE COMEDY. And cares enough to do some research on how the court system works. I don't think the folks behind Ally McBeal are doing anything so I'd get them to write She-Hulk.
Second I'd make it a five-episode mini-series. Each episode will be around an hour long.
In the series, Jen is already leading a double life as both She-Hulk and her lawyer persona. We could have Jen break the fourth wall on she was planning on doing some deep character-driven arc that led to him becoming the green amazon she is now but that would be boring to most people. A knock on people not wanting origin stories for superheroes.
Jen's character arc in this series is that ever since she was a little girl she wanted to be a hero. But she lacked the powers and the physical capabilities in making it happen. So she decides to save people in a different way. By being a lawyer. Yet she soon realized just how fucked the American justice system is. So her arc is trying to straighten it out. Both as a lawyer and as a hero. It gives a nice underdog story that makes you want to root for her.
In this series, she's helping out a fellow hero who has been charged with a crime. As much as I hated the random cameos I felt this one plays a critical part in Jen's Arc. Jessica Jones.
Jessica had been arrested for the crime of murder and Jen, at this point in her law career, has been working as a public defender. So she's appointed as a lawyer for Jessica's case. Jen hears Jessica's side of the story and she comes to the conclusion that she was framed. So she investigates who framed her. But she's not alone as she gets an ally in Daredevil.
And no I'm not going to have it where they have sex because No. They just met first of all and if I were going to have it happen then it would be gradually. Also, the only cameos in this piece are that of Jessica Jones and Matt Murdock. It by no means sidelines Jen as she plays a pivotal role in Jessica's innocence.
Jen and Matt find out who framed Jess. Jen clears Jess's name. And the case gains her a bit of celebrity status. The series ends with her forming her own law firm.
So with this scenario, you have an underdog arc of Jen fighting the system. Jen goes out of her way to keep an innocent person from going to jail. And making friends within the superhero community. And end things to where she'd go on further adventures should the show is well recieved.
